Discussing cause I-revised

           Michael Williams opened a new store selling compact discs. However, after he had run this store for three months, he ultimately closed it. There are several causes of his failure. One reason is that the location of this store was far from the town. Therefore, most people would buy discs in two large music stores in the town rather than in Michael’s store. Another reason is that the age of residents in the Fairfax was almost forty to sixty. Most of the middle-age people didn’t like hip-hop and rock music. Finally, the hours of opening were so short that there were few clients. Besides, Saturday and Sunday were the peak time, but Michael’s store didn’t open on these two days. To sum up, if Michael had observed in advance, he would not have closed down his store.