During the next four years, I would like to choose English as my major in college. I think that my English ability is not good enough, especially my oral speaking and my writing skills. Therefore, I have a desire to be admitted to the National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology. I hope that I can have a great process in my English communication ability. When I go abroad, I won’t talk to the foreign in fear but in confidence. In the future, I would like to be an interpreter. Translating my favorite books is very interesting and worthy. In addition, I also want to study Japanese as my second language. Japanese comic books and novels have a great influence on me. One day, I would like to make pilgrimage to Japan. If I can enter your school, I will study hard and make more efforts to sharpen my English.
have a great process→ progress
回覆刪除make pilgrimage→ make a pilgrimage
foreign改成foreigners
回覆刪除然後好像是 with confidence, 不太確定>_<
珉玗愈看愈帥摟:">
good!
回覆刪除process?!
回覆刪除是progress吧
其他沒了吧