2011年10月4日 星期二

Self-Evaluation

Most of my friend will say that I am an easy-going, friendly, humor person. But I think that my best advantage is enthusiasm. I will do my best to makes things which catch my attention and interest me perfect.  
Being English major, enhancing my English ability is very important; therefore, I will read not only English magazine, such as Advance and Studio classroom but also read some English novels. When I read books, I enjoy the incentive plot and absorb the beautiful lines which I can use in the writing at the same time.
Apart from studying, I also do some extracurricular activities. One of my hobbies is play volley ball. Every Saturday, I will show up at the playground. To me, playing volley ball all day long isn’t an exhausted but meaning activity. When I don’t do well on it, my teammates always patiently tell me what inadequate I have, and how to correct my mistakes. I like to enjoy the feeling of playing with my best friends.

4 則留言:

  1. lines→sentences 我覺得這樣比較合適拉...
    volley ball→volleyball
    meaning→meaningful

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  2. 第一句的friend要+s哦
    還有名詞humor要改成形容詞humorous

    I will do my best to makes things...
    make用原形, 不用+s哦

    English magazine也是加s哦~~~
    Advance後面有d~~ XDD

    volley ball要合起來變volleybal哦

    exhausted要改成exhausting
    因為它是形容事物activity

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  3. I will do my best to makes things
    make不用加s

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  4. Most of my friend
    Most of my friends

    I will do my best to makes things
    I will do my best to make things

    magazine"s"

    volley ball
    volleyball

    用meaning很怪...
    應該是meaningful吧

    好不想打中文所以就這樣吧

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