Most of my friend will say that I am an easy-going, friendly, humor person. But I think that my best advantage is enthusiasm. I will do my best to makes things which catch my attention and interest me perfect.
Being English major, enhancing my English ability is very important; therefore, I will read not only English magazine, such as Advance and Studio classroom but also read some English novels. When I read books, I enjoy the incentive plot and absorb the beautiful lines which I can use in the writing at the same time.
Being English major, enhancing my English ability is very important; therefore, I will read not only English magazine, such as Advance and Studio classroom but also read some English novels. When I read books, I enjoy the incentive plot and absorb the beautiful lines which I can use in the writing at the same time.
Apart from studying, I also do some extracurricular activities. One of my hobbies is play volley ball. Every Saturday, I will show up at the playground. To me, playing volley ball all day long isn’t an exhausted but meaning activity. When I don’t do well on it, my teammates always patiently tell me what inadequate I have, and how to correct my mistakes. I like to enjoy the feeling of playing with my best friends.
lines→sentences 我覺得這樣比較合適拉...
回覆刪除volley ball→volleyball
meaning→meaningful
第一句的friend要+s哦
回覆刪除還有名詞humor要改成形容詞humorous
I will do my best to makes things...
make用原形, 不用+s哦
English magazine也是加s哦~~~
Advance後面有d~~ XDD
volley ball要合起來變volleybal哦
exhausted要改成exhausting
因為它是形容事物activity
I will do my best to makes things
回覆刪除make不用加s
Most of my friend
回覆刪除Most of my friends
I will do my best to makes things
I will do my best to make things
magazine"s"
volley ball
volleyball
用meaning很怪...
應該是meaningful吧
好不想打中文所以就這樣吧