My grandfather has Alzheimer’s disease, which always makes him forget where his house is. One day, my grandfather didn’t come home. Whole my family thought that he might get lost. We are so anxious. Therefore, we asked for help for polices. My grandfather is medium height and average weight. Also, he has noticeable curly silvery white hair. And he wears thick presbyopic glasses. In addition, his face is covered with wrinkles. The last time we saw him is this morning, he wear a yellow T-shirt and worn-out pants. Finally, we found him. He was in a deserted house which piled up lots of garbage. We are so glod that we found him.
Whole my family...
回覆刪除不確定＂Whole＂可不可以這樣用。
我或許會寫＂All＂。
Therefore, we asked for help for polices.
我會改：..., we asked the police for help.
（＂police＂不可以加＂s＂吧。）
The last time..., he wear a yellow T-shirt and worn-out pants.
＂wear＂要用過去式＂wore＂。
We are so glod that...
＂glod＂是＂glad＂才對。
咦咦？所以祖父已經找到了？
（－－那就不用找了嘛…）
發現妳和姜姜
有二條句子長得好像呢。
真巧。
Whole my family thought that he might get lost. whole放前面好像怪怪的
回覆刪除we asked for help for polices police應該不能加s吧? 如果是我我會寫 we asked the police for help
The last time we saw him is this morning, he wear a yellow T-shirt and worn-out pants. wear應該要用wore吧 因為是今天早上
glad打錯了~~
Whole my family...
回覆刪除感覺很奇怪
We are so anxious
是
We "were" so anxious吧
we asked for help for polices
這句超奇怪的
不會這樣用吧?
改成
we asked the police for help會不會比較好
he wear
應該是
he wore吧
We are so glod that we found him.
應該是
We are so "glad" that we found him.
Therefore, we asked for help for polices.
回覆刪除polices改成the police感覺比較好
The last time we saw him is this morning
是was this morning吧~~~
We are so glod that we found him.
glad拼錯摟:D
Therefore, we asked for help for polices.這一邊我會改成 we askde the police for help. 然後，The last time we saw him is this morning. 這邊is改成was? 最後，glad打錯囉同學^^ PS.我覺得你Finally那邊接的太緊促了，有點突然...
回覆刪除We "are" so anxious
回覆刪除要過去式喔!
we asked for help for "polices"
我覺得用the police比較好
he "wear" a yellow T-shirt and worn-out pants
是過去式
We are so "glod" that we found him.
是glad
前後動詞是不是要一致呢??
1.Whole my family thought that he might get lost.
回覆刪除→My whole family thought that he might get lost. (我會想這麼改…)
2.We are so anxious.
→We were so anxious.
3.Therefore, we asked for help for polices.
→Therefore, we asked the police for help.
4.The last time we saw him is this morning, he wear a yellow T-shirt and worn-out pants.
→The last time we saw him was this morning, he wore a yellow T-shirt and worn-out pants.
5.We are so glod that we found him.
→We were so glad that we had found him.
(以上，淺見…)
Whole my family 好像有點怪耶
回覆刪除We are so anxious應該用過去是吧第竟是之前發生的
we asked for help for polices這具應該改成we asked the police for help感覺比較對
We are so glod拼錯了是glad
對了你好像沒有加我耶...
Whole my family...
回覆刪除好怪的說
We are so anxious...
過去式