One of teacher in my school resign his job, hence, I need to hire a new English instructor. I received two resumes which are Lynn Whitnall and Debra Fines mail. Though the level of Debra’s education is higher than the level of Lynn ’s education, and that Debra’s employment is more than Lynn ’s, Lynn Lynn Lynn
One of teacher in my school resign his job
回覆刪除teacher應該要加s然後resign也要加s
I received two resumes which are Lynn Whitnall and Debra Fines mail.應該要用所有格Lynn Whitnall's and Debra Fines's mail.
Though the level of Debra’s education is higher than the level of Lynn’s education
如果是我我應該會寫
Though the level of Debra’s education is higher than that of Lynn’s
One of teacher in my school resign his job
回覆刪除的teacher要加s
然後resign加ed
Lynn Whitnall and Debra Fines mail
是兩個不同人的喔
所以應該是
Lynn Whitnall's and Debra Fines's mail
應該就這樣吧
時態一致會比較好!!!
回覆刪除I received two resumes which are "from" Lynn Whitnall and Debra Fines mail.
and that Debra’s employment is more than Lynn’s, Lynn’s teaching experience is more than Debra’s
那個that可以刪掉吧
Lynn is great on Spanish
是be good at(請不要自行發明
以上(睏= =
1.One of teacher in my school resign his job, hence, I need to hire a new English instructor.
回覆刪除→One of the teachers in my school resigned his job; hence, I need to hire a new English instructor now.
2.I received two resumes which are Lynn Whitnall and Debra Fines mail.
→I received two resumes which were Lynn Whitnall's and Debra Fines's(此處不確定) mail.
3.Furthermore, both of them can speak French fluently, but Lynn is great on Spanish, French, and Japanese.
→Furthermore, both of them can speak French fluently, but Lynn is good at Spanish, French, and Japanese.
(既然前面提到received，為過去式，後面全部統一比較好。)
(以上，淺見…)
One of teacher in my school resign his job這句應該用過去式
回覆刪除I received two resumes which are Lynn Whitnall and Debra Fines mail這句我看不太懂...
and that Debra’s employment is more than Lynn’s這邊不需要that吧
差不多這樣
One of teacher in my school resign his job, hence, I need to hire a new English instructor.
回覆刪除teacher加s 還有resign也要加s
job和 hence 中間用分號或重新一個句子
I received two resumes which are Lynn Whitnall and Debra Fines mail
是Lynn Whitnall's and Debra Fine's mails
Though the level of Debra’s education is higher "than the level of Lynn’s education",
改成than that of Lynn's
第一行＂teacher＂加＂s＂。
回覆刪除第二行最後的人名用所有格。
Besides, Lynn is excellent in Teaching Award...
想寫＂...Lynn is excellent at getting...＂。
妳和姜姜的文章，
好像雙胞胎喔ˇ（葛蘭多）
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。
One of teacher in my school resign his job, hence, I need to hire a new English instructor.
回覆刪除tracher要加s哦^^