2011年5月18日 星期三

Contrasting-I

      I’m a college student and the school is far from my house, therefore, I need to look for an apartment. After having a careful consideration, I choose the apartment called Campus Apartments rather than Fairfax Apartments. It’s because its rent is much cheaper than Fairfax Apartments’. Unlike Fairfax Apartments, Campus Apartments is unfurnished. But I can rent some used-hand furniture. Most importantly, Campus Apartments allow keep pets. Sometimes, if I miss my family, my pet can company with me, and I’m no longer lonely. Moreover, Campus Apartments are my best choice.

4 則留言:

  1. cheaper換成available會不會好聽一點XDD

    對不起那個used-hand是...什麼?
    second-hand嗎?

    allow keep pets
    好像怪怪的欸=口=

    Moreover, Campus Apartments are my best choice
    呃...
    "are" my best choice是對的嗎???

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  2. used-hand
    what's this?

    Campus Apartments allow keep pets
    and what's that??

    over!!

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  3. I’m a college student and the school is far from my house, therefore, I need to look for an apartment.
    therefore前面應該要用分號
    used-hand 這個用法好像錯誤了
    Campus Apartments allow keep pets這個有點怪欸

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  4. allow keep pets用法怪怪的
    Moreover, Campus Apartments are my best choice這個結論句怪怪的耶

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