Many students always complaint they don’t like to wear school uniforms, because school uniforms are inconvenient, uncomfortable, and absorbent. But I’m not see eye to eye on wearing school uniforms.
First of all, we do not need to think what we have to wear. Also, always wearing school uniform is the best way to save money. We need not to spend too much time and money to buying new clothing.
Secondly, it is easy to identify what school you study. If students have some emergency situations, passersby can immediately inform school teachers.Finally, students who wear school uniforms can display orderliness of their school. If students go to school with different clothing, it will be very tangling.Therefore, I strongly support that students should wear school uniforms.
But I’m not see eye to eye on wearing school uniforms.
回覆刪除→But I don't see eye to eye on wearing school uniforms.
第一段是反對意見，第二段變成支持，建議重新思量自己的心意^Q^!
Many students always complaint they don’t like to wear school uniforms
回覆刪除complaint是名詞
We need not to spend too much time and money to buying new clothing.
spend後面接ving不用加to
這是當糾察的後遺症嗎??XDDDDDD
We need not to spend too much time and money "to" buying new clothing.
回覆刪除改成on會不會好一點?
what school you study
是which吧?
然後沒了(?)
complaint是名詞哦
回覆刪除要改成動詞complain
We need not to spend too much time and money to buying new clothing.
need not後面接原形動詞, 這邊的to要刪掉哦
Many students always "complaint" they don’t like to wear school uniforms
回覆刪除這裡應該是要動詞complain
We need not to spend too much time and money "to buying" new clothing
這裡直接加Ving就可以了
如過要加介系詞的話是in喔
Many students always complaint...
回覆刪除應該是＂complain＂才對。
But I’m not see eye to eye on wearing school uniforms.
應該是＂I see eye to eye on...＂…妳是同意沒錯吧？
We need not to spend too much time and money to buying new clothing.
＂need not＂＆＂spend＂後面不用加＂to＂。
Secondly, it is easy to identify what school you study.
＂what＂要換成＂which＂吧。
在下覺得，有時妳的文章
就像雷多的審美觀一樣－－
令人不解。（笑）
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。