2011年4月27日 星期三

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       Lourie’s shopand Green’s shop have a similar ladies hoodies. For example, both Lourie’s and Green’s ladies hoodies are machine washable. Lourie’s ladies hoodies is the same material as Green’s. Both of them are cotton blend. Also, the size of Green’s like the size of Lourie’s. They are size 4-14. In addition, they have the same colors. You can choose red, navy, white, and green. Moreover, the price of the ladies hoodies in Lourie’s are $34.99. Likewise, Green’s shop has the same price. If you want to buy the ladies hoodies, you can refer to these two shops.

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  1. Lourie’s shopand Green’s shop have a similar ladies hoodies.
    shop 和 and忘記空一格摟~~ a要去掉 因為是複數
    Lourie’s ladies hoodies is the same material as Green’s
    應該是are
    the price of the ladies hoodies in Lourie’s are $34.99
    應該是is吧 因為是price
    Likewise, Green’s shop has the same price
    前面已經用likewise了後面還用了the same好像重複了!
    you can refer to these two shops.
    這邊用refer to 是不是怪怪的><?
    these two shops感覺用the two shops比較好

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  2. Lourie’s shopand Green’s shop have a similar ladies hoodies.
    "shopand"要分開。
    "shop"加"s"。
    "a"應該不用…

    Both of them are cotton blend.
    想在"are"後面加"made of"。
    (怎麼又和某人一樣的句子…)

    如有誤,請不吝嗇指教。

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  3. 第一句的shopand是shop和and吧?
    害我字典都查不到這個字XDDDD

    Also, the size of Green’s like the size of Lourie’s.
    這裡的like前面應該要加個is吧
    不然就變成"喜歡"的意思了

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  4. 1.Lourie’s shopand Green’s shop have a similar ladies hoodies.
    → Lourie’s shop and Green’s shop have similar ladies hoodies.
    2.Lourie’s ladies hoodies is the same material as Green’s.
    →Lourie’s ladies hoodies are the same material as Green’s.
    (以上,淺見…)

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  5. Lourie’s shopand Green’s shop have a similar ladies hoodies.這邊shop 跟and要分開,然後後面ladies hoodies是複數,所以前面不用加a。
    Also, the size of Green’s like the size of Lourie’s. 這一句...怪怪的。

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  6. shopand
    是純粹忘記空格還是什麼
    看不懂@@

    the price of the ladies hoodies in Lourie’s are $34.99.
    不是用are吧?

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  7. shopand中間要空格
    a similar ladies hoodies應該不用a
    Lourie’s ladies hoodies is the same material 這句hoodeis是複數哦然後is the same material感覺有點怪

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  8. Lourie’s "shopand" Green’s shop have "a" similar ladies hoodies.
    是shop and,不用a

    Also, the size of Green’s "like the size of" Lourie’s.
    這裡改成is like that of

    Moreover, the price of the ladies hoodies in Lourie’s "are" $34.99.
    是is喔!

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