My elder brother, Kevin and my younger brother, William have some similarities. First, judging from their appearance, both of them have modeled’s figure. They are 180 cm height and burly and they have good-looking faces which always make girls have a crash on them. Besides, blue is their favorite color. They like anything that has blue color. Therefore, all of the furniture in their rooms is blue. Sometimes they will wear blue shirts, blue pants, blue shoes. To my admiration, not only are they good at playing computer games, but they are top students who always get a perfect score. According to those similarities, they’re always regarded as a twin.
both of them have modeled’s figure.
回覆刪除modeled 有這個詞喔?
they are top students who always get a perfect score.
應該是要去掉a變scores
They are 180 cm height, burly and they have good-looking faces which always make girls have a crash on them.這句這樣應該會比較好
they’re always regarded as a twin.
應該是要去掉a變twins吧!
^^
They like anything that has blue color改成anything that is blue會不會比較好?
回覆刪除還有有modeled這個辭嗎?
a twin應該是twins哦
嗆拉搭~
不曉得＂modeled＂是什麼意思呢？
回覆刪除To my admiration,...不確定用法對不對，
＂To my amazement＂應該比較常見。
not only ..., but they ... get a perfect score.
＂score＂應該要去＂a＂加＂s＂吧。
最後一個字＂twin＂也是去＂a＂加＂s＂。
真難想像有人穿的整身藍…
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。
modeled’s
回覆刪除↑這是...?
They like anything that has blue color.
anything 換成 everything會不會好一點?
get "a perfect score"
感覺怪怪的@@
a twin是...啥?
他們都說完了!!!= =
回覆刪除so~~~
good night!!!
1.First, judging from their appearance, both of them have modeled’s figure.
回覆刪除→First, judging from their appearance, both of them have model figure.
2.They are 180 cm height and burly and they have good-looking faces which always make girls have a crash on them.
→They are 180 cm height and burly and they have fascinating appearances which always make girls have a crash on them.
3.They like anything that has blue color.
→They like anything whose color is blue.
4.According to those similarities, they’re always regarded as a twin.
→According to those similarities, they’re always regarded as twins.
(驚為天人！發明大王，詩薇同學…)
(以上，淺見…)
They are 180 cm height and burly
回覆刪除and 是對等連接詞
所以前後應該是要連接相同詞性的東西喔!
Sometimes they will wear blue shirts, blue pants, blue shoes.
我建議最後一個要加上and
My elder brother, Kevin and my younger brother, William have some similarities.
回覆刪除這句逗點的同位語感覺怪怪的
如果是我會寫成
My elder brother, Kevin, and my younger brother, William, have some similarities.
They like anything that has blue color.
that has改成with感覺比較好:D