I’m a college student and the school is far from my house, therefore, I need to look for an apartment. After having a careful consideration, I choose the apartment called Campus Apartments rather than Fairfax Apartments. It’s because its rent is much cheaper than Fairfax Apartments’. Unlike Fairfax Apartments, Campus Apartments is unfurnished. But I can rent some used-hand furniture. Most importantly, Campus Apartments allow keep pets. Sometimes, if I miss my family, my pet can company with me, and I’m no longer lonely. Moreover, Campus Apartments are my best choice.
cheaper換成available會不會好聽一點XDD
回覆刪除對不起那個used-hand是...什麼?
second-hand嗎?
allow keep pets
好像怪怪的欸=口=
Moreover, Campus Apartments are my best choice
呃...
"are" my best choice是對的嗎???
used-hand
回覆刪除what's this?
Campus Apartments allow keep pets
and what's that??
over!!
I’m a college student and the school is far from my house, therefore, I need to look for an apartment.
回覆刪除therefore前面應該要用分號
used-hand 這個用法好像錯誤了
Campus Apartments allow keep pets這個有點怪欸
allow keep pets用法怪怪的
回覆刪除Moreover, Campus Apartments are my best choice這個結論句怪怪的耶